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Minimaru, the new Shadow Lord? I think soFollow

#52 Jan 22 2006 at 8:24 PM Rating: Good
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Hmmm... I don't know who to root for... >.>;; both are RDMs..... But, Mini did kill the Star Sibyl..... GO KOL!!!

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#53 Jan 26 2006 at 1:46 PM Rating: Decent
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/cheer Kolvar

. . . He's writing the story.

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#54 Jan 27 2006 at 3:19 AM Rating: Good
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But... cuteness. ; ;
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Ok, I was gonna write stuff but I am running late and gone for the weekend to Jail >.> Forgot to pay a ticket and got 3 days in jail, fun huh?
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#56 Jan 28 2006 at 12:44 AM Rating: Good
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I know I have a get out of jail free card somewhere...
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#57 Jan 28 2006 at 10:37 PM Rating: Good
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Aaahhhh man let me know when you write more! I'm on the edge of my seat here.
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#58 Jan 29 2006 at 5:28 AM Rating: Decent
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Then use your Shadow Powers and get Kolvar out the Iron Bar Mog House before something terrible happens to him....Like he drops the soap. XD
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#59 Jan 30 2006 at 6:50 PM Rating: Decent
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Rehosted on KI. Everyone deserves to read this.

Coulda just linked it now that I think about it . . .
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#60 Jan 30 2006 at 8:05 PM Rating: Decent
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Minimaru lunged foward just as Kolvar did too. THeir swords met in midair, sparks of lightning flying from them. They both fell back, but instantly Minimaru struck again, catching Kolvar off guard. Pieces of stone fell from his Stoneskin. He looked at her, taken back by her quickness.

She spoke quickly to cast Paralyze on Kolvar, he watched as a shadow slowly disappeared. He cursed, she smirked as she started to speak several words. He knew what she was doing and reached for a Shihei to recast his shadows. She casted Diaga very quicky, then she struck quickly, he parryed her without a problem.

She cursed as he finish calling forth his shadows. He watched as small flacks of stone chipped away from his Dia effect. Soon his whole Stoneskin would dissappear.

He moved quickly and hit the shoulder of Minimaru, she wasn't ready for this and a trace of blood moved down her arm, she turned her head quickly. Looking from her wound to Kolvar, then she started to speak several new words of magik that Kolvar did not know. He quickly spoke the words for the spell of SIlence. She smirked as she resisted the spell. He sowre again and attacked her, hitting her twice more. SHe stopped speaking mid spell.

Jumping towards Kolvar, she did a complicated set of moves, first swinging wide and taking ouyt one of his shadows then instantly swinging again and destroying another. She smiled as she started to swing again, stabbing thru one more shadow then she connected with Kolvar, watching a huge chunk of his Stoneskim fall off. He was unprotected. He stepped back.

She swung again knockng him back 10 feet or so into a table. He watched as vase fell over, smashing to the ground, quickly he spoke the words for cure and felt his wounds healing. He attempted to recast Stoneskin but Minimaru jumnped in and hit hard again. He doubled over.

his body shaking as she stood over him, she jumped high, raising her sword above her head.

To be contuined.......
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#61 Feb 04 2006 at 6:09 PM Rating: Good
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Oh man, ohhh man.. I bet someone is gonna run in and save Kolvar's day, huh?!
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#62 Feb 04 2006 at 8:00 PM Rating: Decent
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Just as she reached her high point, Kolvar drew the last of his strength and rolled over. Her sword glancing off his shield as he rolled. Sparks flew as her sword made contact with the ground. She swore loudly.

Kolvar pushed himself to his feet and spoke several words for a high power cure. He felt his body regenerate. Minimaru jumped at him, missing him buy inches. She swung herself around and swung her sword at him. He barely parryed it.

Regaining his composer, he quickly pulled a shihei out of his belt pouch, calling forth his shadows. Minimaru swung again, making on of his shadows vanish. He started to speak the words for Stoneskin quickly.

Minimaru watched as a great chunks of earth rose and surround Kolvar. She spoke several words of magik and a giant Lightning Bolt jumped from the sky and hit Kolvar, one of his shadows disappeared. She just smirked at him.

Kolvar taken aback by her smirk, ran to attack her just as she started to mouth several words. Then he stopped. A giant ring surrounded him and grabbed his feet. Holding him in place. He swore at her.

"You think holding me like will stop me? WELL IT WON'T" He shouted at her.

Laughing at him, "No but it will give me to time to finish my plan."

She lowered her head and spoke very omish words, Kolvar could not hear her. But then suddenly the ground shook. A huge drak circle appeared and from it ame a great a wolf looking creature. Kolvar knew this must be the legend Fenrir. He, like many adventures, had only heard rumors of this creature.

Fenrir bowed forward on his front paws, bowing to Minimaru, his master. Minimaru just said four words, four very normal words. Kolvar was stunned with shock.

"Kill him my pet!"

To be countined.......
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#63 Feb 04 2006 at 10:57 PM Rating: Decent
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omg minimaru you are so evil ; ;
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all Kolvar needs to win is a bard ^_^
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#65 Feb 05 2006 at 4:45 AM Rating: Good
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Hahaha not am I only 75RDM but my SMN is 73 too, that's awesome with Fenrir, go wolfy go! Someone tie a steak around Kolvar's neck!
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#66 Feb 05 2006 at 12:02 PM Rating: Good
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see look at what she writes, complete evil :P

Edited, Sun Feb 5 12:03:36 2006 by Kolvar
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#67 Feb 06 2006 at 12:38 PM Rating: Good
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Thank you all for a very fun thread!

Minimaru is a wonderful player, Darklord or not... She is responsible for my linkshell's win in Dynamis - Beaucedine, last Saturday night. Summoner kiting for the win!

I am so happy to be friends with both Kolvar and Maru...

Keep it up, you two. I will get a raise three for whichever of you loses this epic battle...
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#68 Feb 07 2006 at 12:53 AM Rating: Decent
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He started to struggle against the =binds on his feet. He felt them weakening as Fenrir edge closer and closer. Then suddenly Fenrir nipped at him, he barely evaded it. As he did, the binds broke free and he tumbled over, his shield dropping and falling a few feet from him.

He reached for his shield and stood up, fenrir came lunging at him. Biting at his body armor, Kolvar bashed at him with his shield. Knocking the great wolf over. He jumped to his feet again, looking at Minimaru as she watched, laughing.

He stood still and pulled a shihei out of his belt before Fenrir had regained his composer. Fenrir lunged at him again and two of his shadows disappeared. Just as he was about to attack again, Fenrir looked over to Minimaru.

"My pet, show him your Eclipse Bite." She barked the order with her sinster smirk.

Fenrir smiled and paced around Kolvar. Kolvar drew his sword and attacked Fenrir, hitting him several times. Fenrir jumped back, blood trickling from his nose. Kolvar wasted no time, speaking several words of magik, a great tunnel of Wind appeared and spun Fenrir several times. He stopped dazed, but quickly regained his senses. He lunged at Kolvar, hitting him with three extremely quick bites.

Kolvar fell back instantly. Kneeling on the ground, blood rushing from wounds on his body. Somewhere in the back of his head he laugh, thinking that he was happy no undead existed here. He quickly spoke the words for cure and his wounds started to disappear, looking over at Minimaru he lunged at her.

His sword connecting with three quick blows, Minimaru fell over onto her side. Fenrir rushed over and pounced upon Kolvar. Kolvar kept hitting him with his shield and blocking as many bites as he could. But it was almsot unless, Fenrir was inflicting a great amount of damage. Then suddenly he stopped.

Fenrir got off and walked slowly to Minimaru' side. He kneeled to Minimaru, his master, and disappeared.

"You see the pain I can cause you?" she started to pace as Kolvar attempted to stand. "This is nothing but a taste of my power. I know things you could never begin to understand. My whole body is a temple of knowledge from all times of Vana'Diel." At this she stopped and watched Kolvar begin to stand.

"You know not what you are doing you feeble Hume. My quest goes far beyond that of the Tarutaru Nation.. She looked a thim quickly and spoke two words, a small fire appeared a this legs. He toppled in pain.

SHe began to apce again, "Why do you attempt to stop me? I am only trying to untie a world of heathens and simpletions." She looked at Kolvar, rolling on the floor in pain. It was then she noticed the ring on his finger. She walked over and removed it from his bloodly finger.

It was a small silver band with a single word engraved on it, Hoboolett. She looked down at Kolvar and spoke the magik words for cure, the pain disappeared.

To be contuined.....

Edited, Tue Feb 7 00:55:41 2006 by Kolvar
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#69 Feb 07 2006 at 7:54 AM Rating: Good
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Aww ; ; that made me cry.. cause for a moment there, I forgot about Hoboolett.. now I miss her, she used to make me the best Rolanberry Pies ; ;
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#70 Feb 08 2006 at 1:24 AM Rating: Decent
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His eyes fixed on the ring in her finger, his last living memory of his great love. She was slowly turning the ring in her fingers, almost as though she was waiting for it to change. She gazed at it then at Kolvar who was struggling to stnad again. She quickly spoke several words and a green cloud formed around Kolvar. He fell to the ground again, his strength being drained from him.

She looked at him solemly, "Why do you still have such an item?"

Struggling to speak, "Cause I care for her," coughing up a small amount blood before he finishes. "and I always will."

"She is gone, never to return. I do remember her. I remember how you two were together," tossing the ring at Kolvar "I think I will reunite you two tonight."

She stood over him, he tried with all his might to lift his sword. He couldn't do it. His hand grasped out for where the ring fell, gripping it tight as Minimaur began to speak a series of words that Kolvar had never heard.

He couldn't focus on them , his mind raced. Running through La Thiene with Hoboolett, fighting monsters with her, first time he gazed into her eyes....it all stopped. She had finished her spell.

A giant ball of white light appeared over him, Swirled around, then oppened a hole on the ground. A magik more powerful then any ever seen in Vana'diel was unleashed. Kolvar laid on the ground. Blood seeping from his lips. Minimaru turned as she heard a noise. The ring rolled around the room, stopping in front of the door to Northern San d' oria.

She watched it bounce for a moment then it stopped. SHe walked forward to pick it up as the door burst open and a lengthy Elvaan Blackmage rushed in. He quickly saw the body of his friend on the ground and then stared towards Minimaru, seeing the ring on the floor.

He quickly spoke the words for Stun, grabbing the ring quick and rushing to his friend. he grasped him, a tear rolling down his cheek as he looked at Minimaru and started to speak several words of magik. Both him and the body of his friend disappeared as black circles surrounded them and vanished.

Minimaru laughed as his spell wore offf. SHe knew that Gavilrain was no match for her. She moved towards the chamber doors of the Kings Throne Room. Pushing them open with force, she gazed about inside. Nothing. Kolvar had told her the truth.

In a fury of curses and shouting, she spoke several words and the whole place was engulfed in fire. She smirked and spoke 4 other words and disappeared.

From outside, passerbys could see black smoke emitting itself from the great Chateau d'Oraguille. Children were pointing and adults were crying. Suddenly the door to the Chateau d'Oraguille burst open and several people rushed out coughing. None was the king nor his sons.

About ten passing by Blackmages rushed inside. Using very strong Water and Ice spells were able to stop the blaze before it engulf the whole building, but the damage was done. The once mighty tower was black and have destroyed. Best it had burned then to leave us with this reminder was the comment from many.

to be contuined.....
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#71 Feb 08 2006 at 8:49 PM Rating: Good
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Just keeps gettin' better an better =D
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#72 Feb 09 2006 at 7:08 AM Rating: Decent
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Me thinks Mini is enjoying this a bit too much XD


But then again, who can blame her?

Kick-*** Story ^^
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#73 Feb 11 2006 at 7:09 AM Rating: Decent
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God Mini no compassion at all? shame shame :P Keep up the good work Kolvar
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At the great crystal of Vahlz, Cloudstrif, Yuffi and Kwenn sat, resting up.

"What were those words she was speaking Kwenn?" Yuffi asked after healing most of CLoudstrifs wounds.

Kwenn looked at her with a puzzled look, "I cannot be 100% sure, but I believe it was the words to one of the oldest and deadlest spells ever."

Yuffi looked at Cloudstrif, then they both looked at Kwenn. "Are you sure?" Cloudstrif finally asked.

Kwenn shook his head slowly. "All the words are not known to me. They have been forgotten for almost then thousand years." He stopped to gather his thoughs for a moment. "These were words used by the great avators back in the time of Promanthia. They died out with the rise of mankind then. They were though long forgotten, but it seems they only laid dormant within The Shadow Lord."

Cloudstrif anf Yuffi looked at each other again. Cloudstrif could see the fear in her eyes, it was the same fear that was in his. He turned to speak to Kwenn but nothing came out.

Cloustrif stood up, looked to the east at the great spire that was Zvahl Castle Bailey. He took s few teps forward to see it better. Then turning to his friends he said, "We must go there. To Zvahl Castle Bailey, to see the home of the Shadow Lord."

Looking at both Yuffi and Kwenn as they nodded. They all stood up and walked forward away from the crystal of Vhazl. They started to run towards the spire. TO find the secrets that The Throne Room possessed.

THere was a white shimmering light. The Galka standing next to the Crag of Dem looked at as a small Tarutaru appeared. He did a simplely waved at her as she headed to the Chocobo herder there.

She stopped dead in her tracks. Turned on one foot and looked at him. She spook three words silently, the Galka fell to the ground, shaking. She walked to him and leaned over him, "You are never to address a tarutaru with a simple wave. Your luckly I don't kill you were you stand!"

She turned and walked to a horrified Chocobo herder.The herder took agulp and spoke uneasily, "I see you.... have 438,409,323 gil.... it will cost you 2,493 gil for a chocobo."

Minimaru looked at her as if she was a crazy person. Jerked the reins from the herders hand and jumped on. HSe trotted away without a word.

The herder let a great sigh out as Minimaru rode out of sight. SHe hurried to the Galka that was slowly recovering. She looked down and spoke several words she had learned from travels. He was almost healed right away. "What is your name? " she asked simply.

"Maikeru." he answered looking in the direction that Minimaru has rode. A tread rolling down his cheak. "I need a chocobo and quickly!" Thrusting a large amount of gil into her hand. He hopped onto the chocobo and rode after Minimaru as quickly as he could.

to be contuined.....
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#76 Feb 19 2006 at 7:18 PM Rating: Good
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Woo, follow that chocobo! high speed choco chase XD
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Gonna try to get back into this lol Been way to long but I will try.




Gavilrain and Kolvar appeared outside of Sandy, in West Ronfaure. Gavilrain looked down at Kolvar, his lifeless body limp in his arms. Tears flowing down his cheeks, he looked the ring within his hand. Slowly he slips it on Kolvars finger, blood flowing over it.

He picks Kolvar up and carries him back into San' doria, gathering stares from people passing by. He never stopped crying as he carried him thru Southern San' doria to his Mog House.

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Cloudstrif sighed as they fought their way to Castle Zvahl Bailey. "These shouldn't be attacking us!" He shouted as blocked another attack.

"The Castle must be protecting itself is all I can figure." Kwenn answered as his lastest spell dropped the demon they where fighting. They entered into the Bailey finally. All exhausted and weary.

"We can't keep this up. My arm can barely hold my shield anymore." Cloudstrif said in an exhausted voice. Almost on cue, Yuffi cast a high level cure spell, Cloudstrif's exhaustion disappeared as if it had never been there. But he still knew that they couldn't make it to the Shadowlords THrone room like this.

After a short rest, they collected their gear and contuined to trudged forward. In their hearts they knew they were Vana' Diels last hope but they also knew that their path wasn't an easy one.

But as they walked forward, it was empty! The place was simply empty. Nothing attacked them but then nothing was there. Almost as if nothing was never here. Cloudstrif bent down to inspect what looked like a burn mark. Turning his head to his friends, "There has been fighting here, looks like a...." A noise ahead interrupted him.

A hume walked backwards from around a corner, knuckles covering his hands. He turned his head and smiled at them as he smashed the head of the nearest demon in, shattering it's horn into shreads.

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Her Chocobo moved at an incredible pace, almost godly. He shivered when he though of it. He had to catch her, he wasn't sure what had happened to her but he knew she wasn't the same. He urged his chocobo on faster and faster. He knew that it would be a miracle if it made it thru Rolanberry Fields. But he had to!

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THey had been watching all that was happening. Their spies throughout Vana' Diel kept reporting more and more biazarre things to them. THe ruling five of the council sat in there Jueno hide-out, trying to understand even half the information they had taken in the last two days.

Valark looked around the table, "We have to do something, by all acounts it would seem that our nemsis would be heading our way."

After accepting nods from all her companions in the room she simply said, "Raise the troops. Pay from help if need be but we must stop this here." With a sigh she turned and exited to her office.
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#78 Nov 11 2006 at 8:50 AM Rating: Good
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Yeehaw, the dark lord rides again! Maikeru says he wants more action, btw.

Can't wait >=O
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Mini, you coming back? I'm back too =3
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#80 Nov 11 2006 at 1:48 PM Rating: Decent
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WOW! This story is awsome, when you finish you should publish it or something, or turn it into a comic, you are very creative, keep it up.

I'd give the story a 10/10, keep it coming.
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lolmnk go back to outdamaging RDMs naked with destroyers.
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Valark sat at her desk, trying to gauge the information she had just learned. THis new threat, one in the form of a friend, Minimaru, was heading towards Jueno leaving a wake of death and destruction. She tapped her desk slowly, looking at a picture of her when she started her Paladin training, so many years ago and so much had changed since.

She had taken over control of a society that worked behind the scenes to keep peace in Garuda, must of been two years ago she figured. She brought her closest friends in to help her and now, what will happen to them in the days to come? What will happen to Vana'diel? The though sent a shiver through her, but was short lived as the door burst open. She stood up to greet the 5 other members of the council.

"Jasinde, Munei, Assiah, Aretmas, Mameshiba what is the going on?" She looked pass them as Hilander entered, there most trusted member outside the council.

Jasinde walked right up to her desk, "Hilander has some urgent news concerning the current issues." She lookd around the room as she said this, almost looking for someone to be listening.

Sitting back down," Please do tell Hilander, I must know what you know." She pointed to a chair infront of her desk.

Hilander waved the offer away, standing in front of the council members, he took a deep breathe. "Minimaru has laid waste to the Royal Palace in San d'oria. She burnt over half it down." Stopping as Valark shifted uneasily. "The Royal seems to escaped but no one knows. I have agents seeking out that information. But there is more Valark....." He trailed off and he shifted uneasily.

Valark looked at him, then the rest of her friends. She saw graves looks on their face and bid him to contuine with a simple look.

Stuttering at first, "Koooll-var died fighting her there, before the palace went ablaze," he saw a look of remorse upon her face. "Fenrir helped Minimaru defeat him, so all accounts says."

She was knocked back byy all this, she sat down suddenly feeling as if the weight of the world dropped on her and simply said, "We need more information."

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Maikeru lost track fo Minimaru somewhere in Pashlow Marshlands, but he knew her course. He kept pushing his chocobo faster and faster, he lots fo lost time to make up for.

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Cloudstrif stood there for a moment at a lost, "Zeos, why are you here?" He had all but finished the question when a great spark of lightning came from around the corner, followed by a Tarutaru, Vegnagunn.

"Well we though you might need some help, Kwenn sent me a message, we came as fast as we could." Zeos responded.

They all looked at each other and nodded. THen ran forward to take the castle on, as friends and allies. They needed to defeat this foe for the sake of all goodly folks and all of Vana'diel.

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Folks watched as Gavilrain carried his friends limp body through the streets. Most not knowing what to say or do, jsut stared. Nothing could of stopped the flow of tears on his face, his friend was gone. No spell could bring him back or stop the hurt. He entered into Kolvar's Moghouse and say his moogle. It started to cry almost instantly as Gavilrain laid his body on his bed. He fell to his knees at the bed side.

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#85 Nov 19 2006 at 8:42 PM Rating: Good
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yayayayay ima in story!!!

and mini my friend, so she not gonna kill me!!
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#86 Nov 20 2006 at 12:30 AM Rating: Decent
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Best story evar. But wait RDM cant die D:. I confused @.@ come back to life!!!!!!!
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#87 Nov 21 2006 at 1:33 PM Rating: Good
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Yeah I don't want to kill Valark, I would however love to kill Hilander =D

Maikeru is also disappointed at his short scene in which he was basically doing the same thing as his previous scene XD

Write more, woo!
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#88 Nov 24 2006 at 9:04 AM Rating: Decent
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Maikeru knew he had moved into Rolanberry Fields, it was almost a new world from Pashlow Marshlands, but it wizzed by him without concern. Then he stopped suddenly, something felt wrong with all this, he just couldn't put a finger on it.

He rode on but at a considerably slower pace now. It was almost if time had slowed to crawl for him. He kept pushing his CHocobo harder and harder, but it was moving a tthe pace of a snail, so it felt at least. He kept glancing around, Gobbue to his left, three crawlers to his right and a.. a.. Tarutaru on a Chocobo just to the front of him, watching him.

His eyes were seeing double and triple, his whole world was spinning.... what was wrong?He fought to stay on his Chocobo, he had a mission, a goal... it was all the mattered at the moment. Why couldn't he contuine?

He etched closer to the mystery Tarutaru on the Chocobo in front of him, he couldn't make out any features but she seemed close enough to touch, he tried. His hand fell well short or at least it appeared to. He reached again, stretching father out, nothing! But that reach cost him what little bit of balance he had, next thing he felt was the thud on grass and ground rushing up to meet him. His Chocobo found it's lost speed as soon and Maikeru left him, and it ran away. Leaving Maikeru on the ground, trying to get his balance.

"Mini....?" He tried to speak more but it came out as nothing. He was flat on this stomach almost crawling, reaching forward with his left hand with every move. He tried to focus, to clear his mind. Everything came at him to quick. Wetness of the grass, noises from a nearby crawler, chocobo in front of him scuffing it's feet. All sensations and noises around him flooded him till all he heard was silence. Silences. An eerie silence of nothing, then came the laughter.

This laughter shook him to the bones. Rattled his every nerve. He tried to put his hands over his ears, but he wasn't sure if he did or even if he could, but it never stopped. His body was shaking, or was he just thinking it was shaking? He had no idea what was happening at the moment, he was just scared.

The laugher stopped abruptly, just stopped. Then came nothing. The silence again. It stayed. After some time he almost wished for the laugh. He had no idea how long he was there or even if he was there. He felt so distanced from himself and yet he knew he was there.

The silence was fading. Noises started to slip into his conciousness. Was that another crawler? Wind through the trees? He tried to hear the scratch of the Chocobo foot that he heard earlier, but he found he coulnd't do it. He just waited.

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Little farther up the tunnel sat Winnie, Vegnagunn's lovely wife and fellow adventurer. She wasn't as seasoned as the rest but she was very skilled. SHe sat and waited for them at a crossroads just short of a bridge. Cast Zhavl Baileys was never her favorite place, but she knew the importance of what was going on here.

She sat and waited, hearing fighting behind her, she rushed that way. All her friends stood, fighting against what seemed like an army of monsters. She had never seen such a gathering of them here and they kept coming!

Cloudstrif was almost on one knee fending off attack after attack, Zeos was swinging his fist with reckless abandonment, Yuffi was standing behind Cloud trying to heal and fighting herself too, Kwenn was casting and casting and casting, and her lovely Veg was standing his back against a wall shouting out spells. She rushed in and started singing. First she sang a song that would boost the spirits and help them refill the magik within their bodies. Then she sang an even stronger one to do the same. Then she went to healing duties, while trying to sing a song that would help Zeos in his never ending attacking.

The fight seemed to never end but finally it did. Zeos laid the last of the monsters out with a mighty blow. They all stood there, almost on the end of passing out. Cloudstrif could hardly hold the weight of his shield or himself. They just sat there and rested for a long time.

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News of the Clodstrif and hsi friends reached Valark in lower Jueno. She heard they had all entered Castle Zvahl Baileys. She knew of their connection to Kolvar and was worried for them. SHe dispatched two of her best men to check on them. Now she waited in her tiny office, staring at pictures of her when she first became an adventure with her friends. Wondering where had that person gone and what was in store for her.
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#89 Nov 24 2006 at 3:11 PM Rating: Decent
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wow, a special section for Mai.. {Good job!} Enjoying the read thus far. ^^
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#91 Nov 24 2006 at 9:09 PM Rating: Good
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love it!!
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#92 Nov 24 2006 at 10:50 PM Rating: Decent
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hey maikeru...


"wrong bag mon!"

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bump, for ur reading pleasure...
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#94 Dec 17 2006 at 3:07 PM Rating: Decent
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Minimaru knew that she had folled Maikeru. She had used an extrmely old nad forgoten spell that confused one minds. She sat on her Chocobo, directing in back thru PAshlow Marshlands. She knew that Maikeru was following her and led him in the wrong direction, now for her true goal, Bastok.

While riding on her Chocobo, she had time to think for the first time since all this had started. She knew she had new powers, powers that kept growing within her every moment she breathed. She knew stuff, stuff that no one else knew and that she had never learned. Words of magik now flowed through her as though she has known them since childhood. Asking herself, "What has been done to me?" She pondered for a moment, then answered herself, "I have risen to the level of gods. Pray to your Altana all you want, my will will decide your fates!"

She smirked at herself and pushed her Chocobo on, almost trampling a small hume walking near her.

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Cloudstrif was the first to rise, sweat still flowing off his brow. He examined his allies, they were all exhausted and they had only traveled a small distance! Sighing softly, he seathed his sword and placed his shield on his back, "Let's contuine. We are probably the last line for all Vana 'diel."

We grunts and moans, they all rose and tredged forward. Pushing pass a small pile of demon bodies sprawed across the floor. Winnie, being unseasoned like the rest, was shakened by the sight. "What had they stumbled into." was all she could think.

Vegnagunn placed a hand on her and urged her forward, seeing the tears welling in her eyes. She pushed the feelings away and pushed forward. Her mind set on her friends and the people of Vana 'diel.

They contuined on for some distance without incident. They passed by several goblins and Qaudav that merely stared at them. It seemed as though they weren't influenced like the Demons. Their hearts all jumped at the though of this, but they knew to well that the path ahead right ot the heart of the demon encampment and yet they walked forwarded, not a single word was spoken.

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Valark walked out of her office and headed up the stairs to the Duchey of Juenos office. She had an open invitation that she rarely used. As much as she wrapped in the politics of most of Vana 'Diel, she kept herself seperated from the day to politics of the cities, especially Jueno.

She entered the castle in Ru' Lude Garden, a grand palace by all standards. She did love to look at the place but she always dreaded entering it. As she headed for the staircase, she was stopped by an older gentlemen that all Adventures knew thorughout Vana "diel. With a cheerful reply, "Maat, my good friend. What brings you here today?"

He forced a smile to cross his face, "I have been hearing rumors from visiting Adventurers." He gave her a grave look that she returned sadly.

"What are these rumors O' Great trainer?" She asked simply.

He smirked at the title, he stilled remmebered training her. How stubborn she was. "Just today I hear rumors of fires in the city of San d'oria, and the royal family is missing. Thinking it's about time I dusted off a weapon or three and take a small trip."

She let a great sigh escape her lips, looking around she took his hand and escorted him to room in the back of the palace. They sat on a couch and she stared at the fire for a long time. "It is true my friend. The Palace in San d'oria has all but burnt. The Royal family is missing but we believe they escaped on their own accord." looking up at Maat, "I have mean searching the sewers and surrounding area for them but I fear they headed to their ancestoral hidng place in King Ronafoure Tombs and I dare not send men their."

He gave her a grave look. She sighed again, "I have a favor to ask of you. One last favor...."

He put a hand on her chin, raising her head up. "Anything for a child of mine." They rarely spoke to each other as Father and Daughter but she knew he was serious when he did.

"Do you remember Minimaru father?" He stared at her and nodded slowly. "She is cause of most of this. I would like you to go to Windurst and speak with Star Sybil. She might have information for us. None of my contacts there can reach her and I dare not trust such a mission to anyone else."

He nodded at him. Placing a hand on her shoulder as he stood and exited. She sat staring at the door for along while, then stood up herself and headed back to the stairs they lead to the Grand Duchey's office.

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#95 Dec 17 2006 at 3:46 PM Rating: Good
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wow! this is sooooo goood!!! when its all done we have to format it and host it somewhere
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#96 Dec 17 2006 at 3:49 PM Rating: Decent
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Valark: Daughter of mot hated NPC in game.. Maat!
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#97 Dec 17 2006 at 4:03 PM Rating: Decent
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Haha! This is great! Needs more Galka though ;)
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#98 Dec 17 2006 at 8:18 PM Rating: Good
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of course he my dad, why you think it take me so long to level? i was rebeling!!
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#99 Dec 18 2006 at 4:34 PM Rating: Decent
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Haha, Kolvar this story is great! Please, continue! I'll gladly compile the whole story and edit as necessary, perhaps we can find a talented artist from Garuda to illustrate it ^^ That'd be awesome! Keep up the good work!
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#100 Dec 21 2006 at 5:23 AM Rating: Good
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bump cause this should get way more attention than that other stuff
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#101 Dec 23 2006 at 5:17 PM Rating: Decent
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Maikeru stood up, ir rahter tried to. His legs gave way quickly and he toppled back over. He landed hard on his right shoulder, so he just lied there staring straight up. The stars had come out since he passed out and he just watched them. Trying to remember the Galkan COnstentalions, all he could find was Gray Fang, The Great Hunter. It was said he was the greatest archer ever, but those days are gone and now these days might end as well.

With a sigh, he rolled over onto his left shoulder, his right was still throbbing. He mustarded all the strength he could and pushed himself to his feet. Wobbling some before he was able to regain his full balance, he just stodd there like a new Galkan Cub taking their first steps.

Now that his balance was regained, everything game spinning back to him. That must of Minimaru on that Chocobo but what the **** did she do to me? He pondered it for a moment then remembered he was headed to Jueno, it was odd, his memories kept coming back slowly as though they were jumbled up in his head. He casted that though aside and looked for his Chocobo, seeing it nowhere around he cursed loudly as he pulled out a whistle.

He blew into the whistle, making a note that far surpassed his normal skill. He blew in it once more and then sat down crossed leged. He attempted to clear his mind and regain his thoughts but they just came slower and slower the more he tried, he finally gave up with a great sigh. Opening his eyes he though backl to when he and Minimaru came here for the first time, their eyes wide with wonder. First time they entered into Jueno, seeing adventerors experienced way beyond themselves and in complete awwww.

He heard something, turning his head quickly he saw a great blue Chocobo approaching. He smiled at the speedness of his Chocobo and he stodd up. His balance was back fully now and he found he was able to stand move with issue. He grabbed the saddle as the Chocobo approached and swung on, "Friend I need all the haste you can bring forth. This is very important to me, we need to be a Jueno as quickly as we can." We an understanding chirp, the Chcobo raced off.

He watched as Rolanberry Fields passed by in a blur. He was more then iompressed with his Chocobo, he never knew he was able to get such speed. They were quickly approacing Jueno. He could see the gate to the great city ahead, but something was wrong. He slowed hsi Chocobo down as neared. There where adventurers here killing stuff, people resting, and more people trying to sell stuff in bazaars. Minimaru wouldn't of just passed without incident, she turned around. he swung his head back the way he came as he though it. Swearing louding enough for several adventers to take noticed his urged his Chocobo over the bridge to Lower Jueno. He dropped him off at the Chocobo Stables and ordered the attendent to take extra care of him and he tosse dher a few coins.

I must talk to Valark he though as he hurried towards her office.

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Gavilrain exited Kolvar's Mog House. His long time friend was dead. nothing no WhiteMage or anyone else could do. As he exited he saw a horde of new and seasoned adventers standing there, staring at him. Was then he noticed that he was covered in blood, the blood of his friend. He clenched his fist in rage and walked on. Recieving a few pats and sorrowed looks from people as he passed them. He was a friend to many it seems.

He contuined to walk through Southern San d'Oria. His mind raced from grief to anger. How could Minimaru do such a such a thing. THEY WERE FRIENDS. Droplets of blood fell from his glinched fist, they were lamost white at the moment.

He wondered what he was suppose to do now. His friend died to the one of the mightiest foes ever to be seen in Vanadiel and he ran away. He walked till he found a quiet place and sat down to think. Letting exhaustion overcome him, he passed out.

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Finally breaking the extented time of silence Vegnagunn asked, "What are we gonna do if we reach The Throne Room."

Cloudstrif looked down at his frined with a worried expression "I know not my great friend. I am doing nothing more then following my heart," he sighed softly as he stopped. "This is the most fearful time for all of Vana'diel. A foe the likes we have never seen has emerged and worse of all, it is a friend. She has claimed herself the Shadowlord, so we will enter the domain of the Shadowlord and find out what we can..."

"We are being followed," Yuffi interrupted as she hugged a wall. They all quickly moved to places of hiding as they heard footsteps. "Could it be a Goblin or Qaudav?" Zeos asked softly.

Shaking his head, "To soft for either. Let's wait we have the number advantage here."

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Then Minimaru joined with the RMTs and took over all of FFXI!

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