The Melee SMN debate ends today:Follow

Just don't expect to find hateful stuff here. Period.

You can find the uncensored version(which is much more offensive without the original censors) on BG forums. Or my blog(which has the original censors), if you can find out who I am.

I don't really care, but whoever edited it really lacks creativity. Moron is a boring word. You are a boring guy. And you took out something important from the story.

It's already been pointed out why I made them black and why the character is racist. This isn't a story about moral development. There are no likable characters in this story. Everyone is a douche. The thugs are your typical stereotypes and they are 2d, and that's on purpose. Same with the character being a void of common sense and decency. Sounds like a train wreck? That was the point. You are suppose to feel awkward and disgust, and shock.

There had to be bad guys to provoke the crazy Summoner in the first place. There needed to be racism to get people to dislike the main character. If you don't get it now, you never will, so it's really hopeless. And you took things too seriously. Like I said, it's a train wreck. Like seeing someone get hit by a car and doing a triple back-flip. You don't want to laugh, but you do.

You should of be a bit ashamed that you edited it. I mean, you can disagree with it, but it's been considered a piece of "art" by some. It's no different than being a school teacher, taking out a passage from a book you are teaching and replacing it. "Anne Frank doesn't die in the end! Superman punches the ***** in the face and saves her! YAY!". I guess you have the will to do something I never would.

I figured if people didn't want a story with word negro, they would have rated me down and the thread would have died. But the majority of people didn't mind. The word negro appears quite early, I'd suggest whoever got offended just hit backspace and not ruin it for everyone else. You knew what you were getting yourself into once "Plan B" appeared. People wanted to be offended if they kept on reading.

But again, I don't care. I'm surprised people rated me up. The last time I did this(it involved a noob Galka DRK complaining about not getting invites, who at the end got tricked into someone's sick Galka underwear party, and finally, ending with Bel-Air) it got nuked to oblivion within an hour. This was originally a troll post anyway. And it won't be my last.

In closing, if anything comes from this, I hope the next time someone posts a thread about meleeing SMN, everyone will just spam the thread with "I'VE SOLOED TIIITAAAANN!!". Because at end, that's what is was, calling Melee SMNs stupid.

PS. Mind of Mencia sucks. If you like me or the story, don't compare me with him.

EDIT: Oh, and they were all teenagers. It's quite clear.

And the race of the Summoner doesn't even matter. When I wrote it, I didn't even put a face of him. The only time thing we learn about his appearance is that he's fat, as he is called that by one the black kids.

Or the Admins could leave it as it is and if people are offended they can stop reading it?

Or I could just repost the original text in its unaltered state and the OP could stay modified, so everyone gets what they want.

Edited, May 4th 2007 2:44pm by Asshandler