Not trying to be rude, but when I hear "comic" in this context, I expect something funny. All 4 installments of this so far have been anything but funny.

Telling us things we already know about the game is not funny. You have to find some extra twist to it and bring out more humor, which is so far sorely lacking in these strips.

Example - dying. It happens a lot in this game. Multiple deaths against the same creature as you desperately try to succeed on a quest, let's say. The "humor" style of this comic would be to just show the girl getting frustrated and having something along the lines of "gee, I'm tired of dying a lot" as the punchline. The humor would lie in something like the old hunter vs. bear joke where the bear says "I'm starting to think you don't come here for the hunting" (look the joke up if that one is too old for you) or an escalating argument with a laughing spirit healer as the deaths begin to add up.

For another example, look at the fine series of WoW comics done by Penny Arcade.