Hello, Asylum.
I've been avoiding posting here like the plague, honestly.
But I've come to terms that there's nothing so bad about it!
So I come with my first challenge to you all...
Name/Comment/Correct my poem...
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Being mislead,
A sheep for the sharks.
Coulda been dead,
Hanging in a park.
But now I see,
I've been so misguided.
I've rediscovered part of me,
Complete whats divided.
Don't take me down with you,
I sink too easily.
If you weren't so Impromptu,
A fascist perversion smiling at me.
I'd take you to the river,
So you'd not drown in the sand.
The weakness make you not quiver,
but the ground in which you stand.
Don't believe the lies,
But don't believe me either.
Don't ask why,
Or you'll be the miser.
I believe in the truth,
I didn't say it will be found.
Stop being so uncoothe,
So absurdly profound.
While your effort was applaudable,
It was only a game.
It was always from the beginning,
Don't be so lame.
P.S; I made the poem like an actual poet... As in 4 minutes creating it and 4 more doing brief editing. So it's definitely not perfect, but this "inspired" poem feels pretty powerful to me out of all the ones I've written so far.
If you'd like me to share some more, please ask. I've got one on "Elitists". :D
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My retinas are burning. Nice yellow!
How about "OTST?"
Totem
Totem
I chose nadenues response as your title.
How about "I pissed in the asylum and all I got was flaming co[Aliceblue][/Aliceblue]ck up my ***".
"Golden Shower"?
In a time of universal deceit, telling the truth is a revolutionary act.
EMO and yellow don't go very well together even if it is **** poor.
You should write a poem about WoW.
Belkira wrote:
Wow. Regular ol' Joph fan club in here.
A poem by Elderon;
Well...here...
Elitists
Let's play a game,
Where I am the winner.
Let's be the same,
But let's tip the scales.
Let's prove our worth,
But with fake realism.
Let's march forth,
Where a mile gets you nowhere.
Elitists
Let's play a game,
Where I am the winner.
Let's be the same,
But let's tip the scales.
Let's prove our worth,
But with fake realism.
Let's march forth,
Where a mile gets you nowhere.
Nah, that one's name should be "I GFM."
Totem
Totem
Pifuaa wrote:
Well...here...
Elitists
Let's play a game,
Where I am the winner.
Let's be the same,
But let's tip the scales.
Let's prove our worth,
But with fake realism.
Let's march forth,
Where a mile gets you nowhere.
Elitists
Let's play a game,
Where I am the winner.
Let's be the same,
But let's tip the scales.
Let's prove our worth,
But with fake realism.
Let's march forth,
Where a mile gets you nowhere.
Aquamoran?
In a time of universal deceit, telling the truth is a revolutionary act.
You know if you really wanted a real opinion on your stupid poems you would go to, oh I don't know POEM.COM!
So, Pif... you a chick?
Belkira wrote:
Wow. Regular ol' Joph fan club in here.
What, you asking to cyber?
Does he always do this?
Me have *****, comprende?
Now I'm going to shoot my ***-cannon into some porcelain for a few minutes, BRB.
Does he always do this?
Me have *****, comprende?
Now I'm going to shoot my ***-cannon into some porcelain for a few minutes, BRB.
What, more poetry?
Poofter wrote:
What, you asking to cyber? 
Me love *****, comprende?
Now I'm going to shoot my ***-cannon into some porcelain for a few minutes, BRB.
Me love *****, comprende?
Now I'm going to shoot my ***-cannon into some porcelain for a few minutes, BRB.
Joph, looks like he's getting it all nice and cleaned up for you.
Pifuaa wrote:
What, you asking to cyber?
Now I'm going to shoot more **** out of my *** into another forum, BRB.
Now I'm going to shoot more **** out of my *** into another forum, BRB.
FTFY
Don't forget to wipe front to back.
Edited, Thu Apr 20 17:20:56 2006 by MentalFrog
MentalFrog wrote:
Pifuaa wrote:
What, you asking to cyber?
Now I'm going to shoot more **** out of my *** into another forum, BRB.
Now I'm going to shoot more **** out of my *** into another forum, BRB.
I should go f*ck myself.
I'm a naughty little **** gnome.
Oh, and could you wipe *my* *** for me?
Edited, Thu Apr 20 17:20:56 2006 by MentalFrog
Pifuaa wrote:
What, you asking to cyber?
Me have *****, comprende?
Me have *****, comprende?
Belkira wrote:
Wow. Regular ol' Joph fan club in here.
Samira wrote:
Pifuaa wrote:
Well...here...
Elitists
Let's play a game,
Where I am the winner.
Let's be the same,
But let's tip the scales.
Let's prove our worth,
But with fake realism.
Let's march forth,
Where a mile gets you nowhere.
Elitists
Let's play a game,
Where I am the winner.
Let's be the same,
But let's tip the scales.
Let's prove our worth,
But with fake realism.
Let's march forth,
Where a mile gets you nowhere.
Aquamoran?
HAH! You admit to READING it! YOU LOSE!
Bodhi should really stop with the damn socks. 
Pifuaa wrote:
YOU LOSE!
Belkira wrote:
Wow. Regular ol' Joph fan club in here.
Pifuaa wrote:
MentalFrog wrote:
Pifuaa wrote:
What, you asking to cyber?
Now I'm going to shoot more **** out of my *** into another forum, BRB.
Now I'm going to shoot more **** out of my *** into another forum, BRB.
I should go f*ck myself.
I'm a naughty little **** gnome.
Oh, and could you wipe *my* *** for me?
Edited, Thu Apr 20 17:20:56 2006 by MentalFrog
You forgot the 'FTFY' otherwise it's just a misquote.
And what does '*my*' mean? Don't you mean 'my'?
* indicates an action which 'my' is not.
Gnomes aren't homos but they are naughty and no need to state their littleness as there are no big gnomes.
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