This will be a very strong dual-wielding warrior, one that will likely hit hard, but take a good chunk in return. I don't know that I would ditch the protection points early on. They may not be as useful at higher levels, but the early defense bonus should be solid. Don't forget that your build doesn't have to work well at both high and low levels. Unlike many MMORPG's, you can actually change your talents, though it'll cost ya'. ^_^
Good choices for the Arms talents, I wouldn't change a thing.
And it is hard to find any fault with your fury selections, as you are using most of the talent tree already. 8P
However, I am told by higher level players that the bonus damage on Improved Cleave grows decreasingly useful as you level, so you might want to respec out of it later.
Also, remember that Battle Shout is more efficient for party use, thanks to its "Area Effect" nature, so if you prefer to solo, you might want to invest in Blood Craze and Piercing Howl instead (Piercing Howl is great for "strategic redeployment" a.k.a. retreating... ^_^)