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#1 Jan 18 2013 at 2:28 PM Rating: Default
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Hey guys can you have a look at my wow videos and give me feedback so I can make them better. Thanks
#2 Jan 18 2013 at 2:39 PM Rating: Excellent
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You can delete them.
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#3 Jan 18 2013 at 2:45 PM Rating: Excellent
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I'm pleasantly surprised at this post. Usually threads like this are peppered liberally with all manners of links both functional and broken. This one has none of that.

Kudos.
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#4 Jan 18 2013 at 2:56 PM Rating: Decent
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woops forgot a link =) There is one now

http://www.youtube.com/user/TheGodlyGoblins?feature=watch
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Smiley: glare
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#6 Jan 18 2013 at 2:59 PM Rating: Excellent
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Damnit Someproteinguy! You had to say something didn't you. Smiley: mad

Edit: Two words, boring and uninspiring. Fairly monotonous tones that make the gameplay seem boring. Try sounding like you have more character than a 1x4 and add commentary other than mumbles and pure filler talk.

Edited, Jan 18th 2013 4:06pm by Criminy
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#7 Jan 18 2013 at 3:03 PM Rating: Excellent
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Sorry, I didn't expect it to actually work. Smiley: frown

Next time I'll be sure to ask for girlfriend photos or something.
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#8 Jan 18 2013 at 3:08 PM Rating: Excellent
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#9 Jan 18 2013 at 3:43 PM Rating: Decent
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oh ok soz i wasnt used to talking while recording so i was mumbling
it will change over the next few parts but 1-3 where in one sitting
Thanks for the feedback I'll try not too sound like I'm at a funeral
#11 Jan 18 2013 at 4:19 PM Rating: Decent
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You know how people say that mostly kids play WoW? Well the voice overs would easily confirm those suspicions.
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#12 Jan 18 2013 at 5:14 PM Rating: Good
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Successful Let's Play videos all have one thing in common: the person playing has verbal diarrhea. You need to let your mouth run for 30 minutes at a time, talking about nothing and everything, focusing on the important aspects of the game and filling the pauses with funny.

I'm not going to tell you to stop making those videos, but I'd ask you to watch some LP videos from "professionals" and take notes. Watch some of TotalBiscuit's "WTF is..." videos and Jesse Cox's "OMFGCata" Let's Play videos.

Now, if you're going to do co-op Let's Play videos, watch some of these. Two dudes rolling around in a game, unable to do anything right, but it's still very entertaining.
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#13 Jan 18 2013 at 5:23 PM Rating: Good
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ty thanks for the feedback
#14 Jan 18 2013 at 6:00 PM Rating: Excellent
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Pretty much what Maz said. You got to devolope what you are and work with it.

Also since you are open to criticism and obviously speak English enough to do Youtube videos...

Atrocious post wrote:
oh ok soz i wasnt used to talking while recording so i was mumbling
it will change over the next few parts but 1-3 where in one sitting
Thanks for the feedback I'll try not too sound like I'm at a funeral


How it should look wrote:
Oh, ok. Sorry. I wasn't used to talking while recording so I was mumbling.
It will change over the next few parts but 1-3 were in one sitting.
Thanks for the feedback. I'll try not to sound like I'm at a funeral.


"ty thanks" is equivalent to saying "thank you thanks" which just sounds pants-on-head bad. Smiley: tongue

Edited, Jan 18th 2013 7:08pm by Criminy
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#15 Jan 20 2013 at 11:27 AM Rating: Default
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Parts 2 is up by the way. As I said before part 1-3 were did in one sitting so they are all kinda bad. Here is the link
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WT56I271dJM&feature=youtu.be
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